Shanayahopkinsisawriter's Blog

Proposal

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Mon, 18 May 2009 18:54:18 +0000

I selected poems because I think that it would be good for me, and much better for me. I think that the other topics wasn’t as exciting then peoms. ilike that poems comes from the heart, and its just like music, and I really love music, and speaking from my heart. I really enjoy that I can express what I really feel. Ithink writing 10 peoms is a lot of work but i rather do this than the others because I think i can be good at it. I appriciate what it takes to do a poem about what others see from what others go through. The poems i wrote is about everything that others see from their self. I wrote about abuse from a girl, and all that she went through. I think that wriing about abuse is very powerful, and that people should hear about it because some people go through it all the time. i also wrote about a young man who bought a gun, and he through his life away because of what he did when he bought the gun. this was alot of work to do but i think that it was worth it because i showed people what other people go thruogh behind close doors. Ithink that the world is hard place to be in but its a beautiful place and people should stop and look around to see all the beautful things in the world. this shows me that i am getting very wise and mature an that all that i put in my assignment is making me succeeded. i think that these poem are go for teenager who are going through alot and need some inspiration in their life. i gav my all in all the assignments that you gave me and i worked hard on all of the work i needed to complete. Thank you and enjoy

My power word

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Tue, 12 May 2009 20:00:38 +0000

I choose this word because its a beautiful word, and it describe me very well. I am a ver sweet person and i really belive that i should be describe as that. i show my kindness everyday and I know that people see me as that. if they don’t then they really don’t know who I am because i do alot for people. I show everyone respect. I show them how nice people can be, and I always have a smile on my face. I am avery sweet person who helps everyone who needs help. I am a person who is wise and I always tell the true and I always make sure that the honest person feels better. I always stand up for the person who gets picked on. I always make sure everyone gets treated well. I make sure that people gets treated equally. Ibelieve if you treat people like you want to get treated and be nice to people you will get far in life. i think that everything happens for reason and that god wants for everyone to be sweet so thats why I choose my word which is SUGARINESS and i like the way the word sounds when I say it.

If I could write a best seller…

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 20:26:15 +0000

If Icould write abest seller book, I would write a fiction book about what a women went through how her life was bad. I would write this story because allot of people always have things that they go through and I would want people to know about what young black girls have to go through in the world. My book would be about all the stuggles that young teenager go through and it would be about young pregnant women have to go through to raise their child. My story would be abnout un heard people, who voice never been heard and I would write this story so that they would understand every thing young black women have to through, women, young pregnant women, and my story would also be about young black men. i think that young black men need inperation and I some times think its hard for them so I would write about that also. I would write about all of these thing so that people could understand their point of view. I think some times people don’t understand young black men. I know what they go through because I see it every day, I see young man tyring to make it and people never give them a chance. Then they drop out of school andsell drugs and then they end up going to jail or getting killed. I think its bad so thats what I’ll write about. Thankyou for reading.

My fairytale…..A happy ending

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 21:11:44 +0000

The experience that Igot out of writing my fairytale is that got to do something that Inever did before. I wrote one story and a play but I nevr wrote a fairy tale before and I’m very proud of what i did. I don’t mind doing this again because it should me how creative I am. This experience showed that I can do what evry I set my mind to do. When i first heard that i had to write a fairytale, Iwas very upset and I did not want to do it. When first wrote the story Idid not like the story at all and i didn’t want to change anything because I didn’t want to do that much writing. Iwas very upset and I hurried up and start writing my paper so that I can change what I want and get what I need to get done. I think that I would’ve not did this paper if i wasn’t the type of person I am. I am a determine person and I know that Im not perfect but Itry the best I could and I think that doing this Iam going to be successful. THe paper that Iwrote made me feel good about my self and Iknow that Iam going to be a intelligent student in college one day. I wish that one day people look up to me and look at me as apositive person. Iwould like to thank you for teaching up to write our own fairytale because it made me feel that Icould be a college student. Ireally like my fairytale and I belive that i did great on my fairytale. I almost gave up on doing it because i felt like it was too much but what I want you to know about me is that I never give up. I believe that Idid good on my paper and I think that I deserve a good grade. Thanks for reading and have a good day.

My fairytale

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:53:24 +0000

My fairtale isn’t going by very well because its hard to make up things. My fairytale is about this girl name zaria and she went to this good school that her moether wanted her to go to. But little did zaria know there was an evil teacher name Mrs.BurgerMeat. nThe lady didn’t like students she was there to make every child life hell. So far i am doing good with the story but its hard to make upb fairytales and its very frustrating. I think if i get a little help with others then my story would aleast be pretty good. I think that my story is going to be good because i am good with making stories because i look at aloy of movies nad television. I know whats a good story and whats a bad story. What i am mad about is that i have to write 8 pages and i don’t like writing a whole lot. I want for my story to be very good and i hope that others like my story. I want for them to like my storya nd to tell others about my Fairytale and i want to tell my friends snd family about my story too.Thank You

After two weeks

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 12:40:13 +0000

I have change during the two weeks because i am starting to do better at writing. But I still think that writing is some what boring. i don’t like writing a whole lot. I like writing alittle and i think that i need help at writin still but i want to learn how to be better at writing so that when i go to college i can look more professional. I think writin would make me successful and i like writing aboiut becoming successful and about my life. I think that i am progessing at writing and i feel that writing is good for me. i would like to learn how to write without having mistakes in grammar. Thank you

Am I a writer?

shanayahopkinsisawriter — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 19:36:38 +0000

I don’t think i am a real good writer because i am not good at it. I mess up sometimes with grammar and things like that. but i like writing about how i feel about things in the world. I like writing about my opinions. I feel that writing is good to relieve stress but i don’t like writing too much because it makes my hand hurt. i like writing peoms and thinking about rhymes and things in that nature. i like writing but i need help with writing because of grammar mistakes.Ithink that i have to learn how to write good in able to be successful in life.Ihave read alot of poems and book that i like. I read Maya Angelou and i really like her peoms.